Monday, 22 February 2016

Popcorn writing



The popcorn makes sounds like a hairdryer. The popcorn begins it’s popping. The popcorn smells like butter. The popcorn came out like hot air balloons looking like clouds. Popcorn tastes like sweet corn,  come into my mouth and I will eat it like a cloud.



1 comment:

  1. Seo Hyun - You have used some of the senses to describe our experience of making popcorn. Referring to the popcorn as "clouds" gave me an image in my head of what the popcorn looked like. Well done! - Kiri

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